This is a 3 page letter that will be gentley placed in a 11x8 yelow envolope handed out to 3 key developmets that i have chosen feel free to copy if your 75 miles away (bake off mike) i still have time to change so critisum is welcome.
on the FAQs shouldnt it be Q. What ever you say A. This is what we do Q. A.
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Bee Clean Pressure Cleaning LLC Serving South Florida Residential and Commercial Chad 561-699-4685 Josh 561-699-4696 New Company Always Doing It Right!!!
no ihave pre selected my zone and will be handing these out my self, if its to much they wont be geting one. But to tell you the truth out of the over 1,000 roofs that i have done its kinda rare that it takes more than 1 hour
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PRISTINE ROOF CLEANING ATCO NEW JERSEY NON PRESSURE ROOF CLEANING SERVING ALL OF NJ,DE & PA 856-753-7576
so basicly im looking to do all calls on a saturday and sunday, if over loaded thats cool but ant nothing like haveing your truck parked in the hood on the weekend they will see whats up and ill set them up during the week for $500 you gota give to get just gota be smart abought it
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PRISTINE ROOF CLEANING ATCO NEW JERSEY NON PRESSURE ROOF CLEANING SERVING ALL OF NJ,DE & PA 856-753-7576
On the First page check your spacing at beginning/end of sentences. And towards the bottom it should be which not "witch".
On the FAQ page there is some grammar mistakes like you instead of your, commas missing, capitization and periods where they shouldn't be. You need look over it real good, don't just use spell check, as it won't pick up on grammatical errors. Then maybe have someone else look over it too because even the most obvious mistakes won't stand out when you've been staring at it for hours.
Also on the PDF might not hurt to say than the 20 year warranty does not cover neglect of cleaning, or something along those lines. People nowadays think if they have a warranty they don't have to worry. Just a thought.
Jon
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Bluwater Roof and Exterior Cleaning
Non-Pressure Roof Cleaning
Serving Lee and Collier counties in Southwest Florida
Ft Myers, FL
(239)466-6980
bluwater@centurylink.net
Safe Roof Cleaning & Exterior House Washing in Naples, Ft Myers and Bonita Springs
I forgot to say, overall it looks good. I have been meaning to put something like that together myself to further educate homeowners. Are you going knocking on doors or how are you handing them out?
Jon
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Bluwater Roof and Exterior Cleaning
Non-Pressure Roof Cleaning
Serving Lee and Collier counties in Southwest Florida
Ft Myers, FL
(239)466-6980
bluwater@centurylink.net
Safe Roof Cleaning & Exterior House Washing in Naples, Ft Myers and Bonita Springs
I am curious to see what kind of return you get from this a week, 2 weeks and a month down the road. I have done door hangers before but never got a good response. Your packet is much more informative than door hangers though.
Jon
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Bluwater Roof and Exterior Cleaning
Non-Pressure Roof Cleaning
Serving Lee and Collier counties in Southwest Florida
Ft Myers, FL
(239)466-6980
bluwater@centurylink.net
Safe Roof Cleaning & Exterior House Washing in Naples, Ft Myers and Bonita Springs
This is a 3 page letter that will be gentley placed in a 11x8 yelow envolope handed out to 3 key developmets that i have chosen feel free to copy if your 75 miles away (bake off mike) i still have time to change so critisum is welcome.
dan your three step process looks similar to my add. HMMMM. strange.Huh. Dude 350 for a two story roof is fuckin rediculous. You betternot complain when and say that you cant get enough for the roofs. You are doing it to yourself. Killing your own market just like these other guys.