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I apologize if this has been covered before but I can't find what I'm looking for.
I have written MANY proposals for Many things but I am struggling with filling out a proposal that sounds more interesting than "Clean Tile Roof"???

What are you putting in for wording to make your proposal more appealing to the customer???



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So no one here writes proposals????

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aaron61 wrote:

So no one here writes proposals????



Though I have written some quotes from over the phone contacts, which were customers that all ready wanted their roof cleaned, I go on site and have my quote on an Ipad and have them electronically sign them and forward on the spot to their e-mail. What you call proposal, I call quote, as my intent is to close the deal on the spot.

Also while I am there at the home I put out fliers in the surrounding area.

In my opinion, the key is in the closing of the deal, which is done in person in most cases. Proposals/quotes mean nothing unless you close the deal. That is a skill set learned and needs to be done in person on site.

I am not sure this is helpful to your question, but I recommend you consider looking at your service as to how I close the deal, the proposal/quote should be simple and to the point.

 



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Thanks for the response but that's not the question?? I too write proposals on the spot with my laptop & portable printer & am very good at closing. I am specifcally asking about wording.
What do you write on your quote "Clean shingle roof"????
I am just looking to add a little more than that!

-- Edited by aaron61 on Saturday 5th of March 2011 07:56:33 AM

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I am afraid I am still missing the point. The quote/proposal is nothing more than whatever you and the customer agree to as terms of the cleaning in writing. If the deal is closed it is not a proposal, but the terms of the quote.

A proposal is the terms you are offering to do the service. i.e. I propose to clean your roof for X per sq. ft., in most cases the proposal is presented to the HO in person while you are there, unless of course you are mailing/e-mailing a proposal to the HO for roof cleaning, than the proposal is nothing more then the terms of the service.

Just my two cents. Maybe others will respond with a better understanding or process.

Good luck.

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aaron61 wrote:

So no one here writes proposals????




Sure if it's over $2000.00, if not I write it on a biz card or brochure. Waste of time to me.



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aaron61 wrote:

Thanks for the response but that's not the question?? I too write proposals on the spot with my laptop & portable printer & am very good at closing. I am specifcally asking about wording.
What do you write on your quote "Clean shingle roof"????
I am just looking to add a little more than that!

-- Edited by aaron61 on Saturday 5th of March 2011 07:56:33 AM




'Remove algae, lichen and moss (if applicable) from entire roof (or north side of roof, etc)'

This way, if there are other causes for discoloration, I'm not on the hook for it.  The word 'clean' is a bit too general for my likings.



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On my Estimate sheet it is described as Roof Stain Removal. Is this what you mean?

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aaron61 wrote:

 

I apologize if this has been covered before but I can't find what I'm looking for.
I have written MANY proposals for Many things but I am struggling with filling out a proposal that sounds more interesting than "Clean Tile Roof"???

What are you putting in for wording to make your proposal more appealing to the customer???

 



Is this what you mean? I have this basic proposal set up and write in by hand, while standing there with the customer, wording that meets our mutual satisfaction on the spot. I do not ask for signed contracts, I just make a duplicate for myself. This also serves as a receipt
Here's my basic starter sheet:


Chuck Bergman SoftWash Roof Cleaning & Pressure Washing

941-255-8600  __ 941-483-3673 __ 941-474-8883 __ 941-698-1959

Father & Son Business Licensed & Insured since1991



Work Location: 

Home Owner:


To: { Here I describe work to be done. I keep it as simple as possible "To clean roof without the use of pressure. To tarp and or water plants throught the course of the job. }












In spite of our best efforts to protect your plants, bushes etc. Chlorine is necessary to kill all algaes growing on your roofs surface. Therefore we strongly recommend that you water your plants for at least 3 days in a row, after we finish, as further assurance of no damaged leaves etc.

Thank you!

Chuck Bergman
5282 Johnson Terrace
Port Charlotte, Fl
33981




 



-- Edited by Bergman Roof Cleaning Port Charlotte FL 941-698-1959 on Saturday 5th of March 2011 09:57:00 AM

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I hand write my proposal in front of the customer once agreed on price. Get a deposit of 1/3 up front. Give them an aprox day I'll be there. I just say clean, but changing that reading this thread to remove gcm, moss and lichens.

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Bruce, what app are you using to have customers sign on your iPad ?

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Treasure Coast Roof Cleaning wrote:

Bruce, what app are you using to have customers sign on your iPad ?



(RightSignature) In-Person E-Signature app

 



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I'm specifically asking about work description...I like:

Remove Discoloration,Lichen,Mold Algae,Pollution from Tile Roof. Care will be used to protect surrounding areas. Landscaping will be watered,covered & or rinsed. Integrity Roof Cleaning will not be responsible for any damage to plants or objects not removed from work area.

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I move the plants and stuff for them and talk about all that kinda stuff while doing the quote....let them know what i find......Grass already dead broken windows etc, then I take pics of anything that is broken or already discolored, dead etc....

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I move the plants and stuff for them and talk about all that kinda stuff while doing the quote....let them know what i find......Grass already dead broken windows etc, then I take pics of anything that is broken or already discolored, dead etc....




 Good to remember!
I always take my "Flip" up on the roofs to document any roof damage but haden't really thought about that for surrounding areas.



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If thats what you shot the BBQ bash with....That was pretty clear video! I haven't thought of taking any videos yet since i don't have a cam small enough to fit in my pockets.... But I've been tryin not to even get on the roof if possible, sometimes you just gotta.

I had to get up on one recently to clean of leaves and branchs off, got 4 black trash bags full of pecan branchs and leaves, I would had included it in the price but he was a WW2 veteran so i just included it for free since I appreciate what he did for our country.

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I always tell my customers when I schedule work, that they should remove any small potted plants, radios,
TV's and personal items from their Lanai / pool areas etc. I tell them anything heavy we will move. I have bid pressure cleaning pool / lanai areas over the phone and not mentioned that, only to find 100 potted plants, all kinds of hanging decorations, clocks, radios, small tv's etc. Because I hadn't told them in advance, I had to remove it all and put it back, which took longer than the pressure washing did!
Now, I always think ahead! smile.gif

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aaron61 wrote:

So no one here writes proposals????




Sure if it's over $2000.00, if not I write it on a biz card or brochure. Waste of time to me.



Youre joking????

 



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aaron61 wrote:

So no one here writes proposals????




Sure if it's over $2000.00, if not I write it on a biz card or brochure. Waste of time to me.



Youre joking????

 



I get a signed proposal for anything over $.50

 



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I was giving Guy a hard time. I think he is pulling our leg!


I dont worry about signed proposals. It hasnt hurt me yet.

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