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i was gonna post it in here but i dont know how lol. i changed my avatar to it so its all good. i'd love some advice/criticism on my new logo. thanks guys

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You know it's a funny thing. I just had this conversation with Matt Christopher. Large business spend hundreds of thousands if not millions of dollars to create the simplest logos. Apple, cost millions. Nike swoosh, millions! There are companies that do real research on this stuff and it costs tons of $$. With that said, I think we count a bit on luck and what we think looks good without really understanding the market. Same goes for these little design places we all use. They may be good artists but true design with branding, and market potential is out of their league.

I think it is pretty, but a little confusing. Not sure they won't think that is snow on the roof.

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yeah i was happy with everything except the roof. any advice? i was thinking of just doing away with the black on the roof and just showing a clean house? i'm also already playing with the phone number and business name for it. trying different fonts. the phone number looks like a 7 instead of a 1 at the end. thanks for the input bill.

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yeah i was happy with everything except the roof. any advice? i was thinking of just doing away with the black on the roof and just showing a clean house? i'm also already playing with the phone number and business name for it. trying different fonts. the phone number looks like a 7 instead of a 1 at the end. thanks for the input bill.



When I did my logo I was sent four proofs. All were simple and to the point. I agree with Bill, it is a little confusing. Not real keen on the arched phone number. That is one of the main things that needs to be seen w/o having to do any guessing. Many years ago I had a sign maker making signs for me just when the vinyl lettering was coming out. The one thing he taught me was to keep everything simple and very easy to read... to stay away from any form of cursive type styles. Also, spend a few bucks for your own domain. My opinion... if you spend $$ on the logo and have stuff printed it will only cost more in the long run if and when you make the change to your own domain.

 



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i was gonna post it in here but i dont know how lol. i changed my avatar to it so its all good. i'd love some advice/criticism on my new logo. thanks guys




I designed this myself. Given the cost as Bill has said, keeping it simple is good advice. In the case of marketing, sometimes more isn't better. 



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Do a search for Greenbox logo maker. It's free and we made our old logo that way.

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thanks guys!

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ok so i played around with my logo some more and i really got it to a point that i'm much happier with it so i changed my avatar to it again lol. let me know what you think. thanks

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Correct me if I'm wrong, but that light blue object above services, Is that a fish jumping or my pain pills playing games with me?  Has me confused.
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lol i was hoping it looked like water spraying from the hose. might play with that some more. thanks gary

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also that small black piece behind the stream of water is the eastern shore of virginia across the chesapeake bay. i may delete that just cause i dont do anything over there, and the shadow of VA is easily recognized without it.

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also that small black piece behind the stream of water is the eastern shore of virginia across the chesapeake bay. i may delete that just cause i dont do anything over there, and the shadow of VA is easily recognized without it.



Hi James - I got your PM.  Keep in mind, I know nothing about logos, so my thoughts are those of a layman/consumer.

I would:

drop the Eastern shore (I love the place, especially Kiptopeke, but I'd drop it from the state on the logo)
drop the hose with the water (Gary's vidican induced fish) coming out of it
drop the green thing (sorry) sticking out to the left of NNK
drop the two stars
ADD a star (maybe bigger? maybe a 4 point?) on the Northern Neck highlighting your service areas.  (I'd definitely do this!!)

I like them a bit more simple. Then again, mine is probably too simple. 

Good luck!


**edit**  psssssst.  Someone just left you a 5 star rating and a bunch of attaboy incons on that spankin' new MC page in your signature  smile  



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lol thanks man i was gonna work on it a little more before i posted in the MC thread on here. i'm new to blogging so thats interesting. they said if i get two more connections i get mayor of my town. that'd be cool. not many local people on there though. ok im' off subject lol. thanks again ted!

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LOL! Really guys? Come on.  Let the professionals do their jobs.

They have more experience with design, graphics and visual impact. They understanding more how to brand a company's image.

My graphic artist who has 30 years experience in professional graphic design just finished my new logo and I am strong believer in you get what you paid for.
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unfortunately mike thats not in my budget right now. but i took everyone's advice and tried it out. i was hesitant but once i was done i like the look. its way more simpler than i had in mind but i do see simple is good. thanks for all the advice. i think i'm happy with it for now, but i'd still love the input. who knows i might go with something completely different. for now its only on here and merchantcircle. hasn't gone on anything printed. i wanna look at it a little while and make sure i'm happy with it before it goes on anything that i cant change easily. thanks again, james

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I understand. Winter is always tough for me to get through too.

Best wishes for a strong prosperous 2011 James, good luck.

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thanks! so whats everybody think of the final one i came up with?

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I like it. Clean, simple and eye cathing.
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thanks! so whats everybody think of the final one i came up with?



James - I think I'd try a different star and maybe a different color for it so that it really stands out?  It reminds me of a state captical marker, and well, you've missed Richmond by just a wee bit  LOL.

Maybe a 4 or 6 point 'star' with long points?  Then if you can find a way to make it sparkle or twinkle for online logo apps, that'd be really eye catching. 

Then again, I know NOTHING about logos confuse

 



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James- I'm prettymuch a dumbazz, but I like it. It's memorable 'cause of the silhouette and it says what you do.

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